Notes

10.11.08

I have, as you see, put up chapter 8 and part of chapter nine.  As you may have noticed, I put up parts of chapters when I can, so as not to keep anyone waiting forever.  Thank everyone for reading. I have also just noticed that Forbidden Forest was also the name of the forest near Hogwarts, go figure.  So that may be changing to strictly Verboten, or to another name, soon.

9.15.08

I’ve revised chapter 6 and 7.  I’m not completely happy with them but they’ll do for now.  And given the revisions, chapter 8 will have to be revised as well and then, hopefully, we can move on.

9.8.08

Chapter 5 has seen the introduction of the history of a Mr. Henry Vale which will be important later in the story.

9.7.08

I have posted the revised chapter 4.  I am glad that the revisions have fleshed out the direction of the story better.  I hope to continue to do that.

9.5.08

Chapter 3 has undergone some pretty big changes so check it out again.

9.4.08

I’m working a bit faster than I had anticipated, so a revised chapter 2 is also here, now.

9.4.08

I’ve made lots of changes to chapter 1 and chapter 2 is underway.  I’m trying to refine the story based on the direction I think its going now and I’m also working on trying to show more about Friday as a person, rather than telling so much.  But anyway, let me know what you think about the changes.

Cheers.